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[Part 1 of Instrumental]

NG isn't a dump

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Sorry, but anybody with half a brain could figure out that this is you singing. It's not your brother because if what you said is true then something doesnt add up. You said that you first recorded this right? And then your brother came and "ruined it"? I dont think so. Why does the guitar stop playing in the the part of the song where there are just vocals, and then the voice quiets down when the "heavier" playing happens? It was meant to happen like that, that's why. I could keep going... Why are the vocals so quiet? Not because your younger brother did it, its because your sitting on a chair away from your microphone because the microphone is sitting next to your amp.

Lastly, you should understand that NG is not a place to throw random garble in hopes that you would fulfill your fantasy of someone labelling you a musician.

Am I upset? Yes, and I think I have plenty of evidence to justify my position.

nightvision

Dawei responds:

right, of course it was me, when i sing i have a stand for my mic. it get's quiet at one part because i was going to add my vocals there, but when i went to take a dump, my brother came in and, since he's a stupid loser, of course he didn't know how to use the equitment. the only reason i didn't explain that early was because i didn't have enough room to right it in the desription. the reason i didn't take his vocals off was because when i did it, i lost all the music. this was like two years ago, before i started taking lessons, and i assure you, i fi performed this at my concert a couple days ago, there wouldn't have been all those people stuffed in to that small room. if you don't think this is good, check my bill cosby parodies, loser.

[Heat...]

Beautiful job

Very great listening, I am incredibly impressed being a guitar player myself. Not at the technicality of it, i'm in love with the chord progression you chose. The 4th chord is especially brilliant.Your dynamics helped clearly communicate your thoughts and the low-fi sound you gave your guitar triggers the listener to feel your emotion.Excellent work friend,

nightvision

[Pale]

Movie soundtrack: reminiscent scene

The origonal impact of this song left me speechless. I could picture this track being best used in a movie scene showing a reminiscent experiance. Sad, but moving, this piece clearly contains the core elements of it's communicative purpose.Enough can't be said about this fine piece of work, great job. 5/5

nightvision

[As a bird flies high]

More excellent work

AS i'm going down the list and hearning all of your songs, I can tell there is a deep drive in your music. The way you write your music almost has a "song" in itself. Very compelling chord progressions. Still sounding very professional, and incredible emotion as I feel that i can identify with your music.

nightvision

[Opening the stargate]

You're right, swing feel does something magical

Excellent, I love the chord progression you used in this song. The swing feel adds an incredible amount the depth of the song. When the bass comes in, the result is very powerful emotion. Very professionally done. I've added this to my playlist (Only the best). I gave you a 5/5, though you prbably deserve a 6 or 7, heh heh.

nightvision

No1r responds:

Thanks again for listening!
The explosion with bass and the very fast ride swing is exactly "my key" of the song. I am happy :)

[Hills of Tuscany]

Excellent quality worksmenship

Great emotion through the entire piece. The key change addes another dimension to the attitude of the song. Volume sensitivity makes diversity and provides consistent interest to the listener. Great Work 5/5

No1r responds:

Thanks mate, really.
Knowing that someone likes your music is something magical as an emotion transfer, something that words can not explain.

[Draze - Phantoms Virus]

Very Solid

I really liked to hear the melody consistent and the bass line change. You changed the origonal bass progression so it sounds much better. Great job. 5/5

[Raging Dispair]

Good attempt

I'll first preface by saying that I apologize if I come out overly negative, I dont mean to be. First thing that I noticed aside from others' comments were that the rythym was too heavily syncopated.I can tell that you're fairly green to guitar (which is fine), and I would suggest doing finger excercises to strengthen up your chords before you record next. I'm sure that your computer could have provided a better effect than slapping the side of the guitar. Personally, I don't think that wasn't the prettiest sound i've heard. In the future, try practising to avoid strumming the entire neck when hitting a single note. Finally, besides the little diversity, I was quickly annoyed by the noise reduction that the second half of the song failed to have.

After saying all of that, I do hope you will attempt to correct some of these mistakes, but keep trying. The worst thing you could do is to stop practising, never do that. Good luck, friend.

nightvision

RadRacer responds:

im not that new at guitar (3 years maybe 4) :( Good suggestions, though I don't know what syncopated means. I'm not sure how to do noise reduction(otherwise I definatley would have, I hate it too) thanks for the review

[All and Sundry]

Yes!

Great job, I'm going to assume this was a live recording. If I would ever come across this grand spectacle of a performance in person, I know I would generously award all of you a gold star and then ask for a second round in hopes of a dance for all the lads and ladies.

Anyhow, now that i've got that planned...Great effort, I look forward to your future arrangements.

[dj_padman - Undead Rising]

Absolute crazyness - I like it

Heh heh, whewww! Thats quite the alert, I tell ya if I was the intruder and I heard this I think I would be scared stiff with confusion.

Thick stuff man, very unique and origonal. 5/5

dj-padman1 responds:

If you were the intruder, I would tell the killer robots to back off ;)
Thanks for the review man, much appreciated.